December 28, 2010

An Idea Blossoms

An author is often asked “How do you come up with your story ideas?” My answer is “Life”. If you keep your eyes and ears open things happen all around you, the unexpected, triumphs and tragedies, gains and losses, and mysteries. Often the tears you shed will transfer to a fictional character’s emotional moment and your readers will feel the genuine tug on their own heart.
This isn’t meant to imply that we write solely about ourselves and our lives, but we do take many of our own experiences and use them to give our characters depth and make them more real.
As an adolescent I remember sneaking into a neighboring building basement
level with some friends to spy on a group of men wiretapping the telephone junction box – in later, jaded years I realize they were probably connected with some divorce lawyer or such, but back then we were SURE they were international spies! There was the exhilaration of believing we were in danger of being caught; certainly if the “international spies” didn’t do us in, our parents would for being places we weren’t supposed to be. When I wroteHis Lucky Charm” and had the hero and heroine in the clutches of international bad guys I remembered the prickly feeling of danger.
A writer’s experiences don’t even have to be close. In “Hostage Heart
the heroine walks into a bank robbery. No, that hasn’t happened to me (at least not yet), but I have been inside banks and I have read newspaper reports of real bank hold-ups. It doesn’t take much for the imagination to kick in and allow me to “see:” the robbery account from my memory of being in a bank. Life gives me tastes and samples and it’s up to me to imagine “the entire meal” so a flooded basement translates to a torrential downpour and washed away homes or the stomachache from eating bad mayonnaise at a picnic becomes the agony of an intentional poisoning.
Writers are always making much ado about the little things.
(excerpt from Hostage Heart)
“Everybody get down! And keep your faces to the floor.”
All of the bank’s customers obeyed immediately. When Deanna raised her head to watch what was happening, the man who had been standing in front of her gently pushed her back down.
“Do as they say...” He cautiously whispered to her from his own position on the floor.
She could see the feet of the frightened tellers as they were ushered in front of the counter to join the rest of the customers. One poor young man was stopped and dragged back behind the counter to empty the cash drawers into a sack. Deanna heard muffled sobbing around her.
One of the masked robbers was moving through the mass of people on the floor demanding wallets, purses and jewelry. Perhaps foolishly, Deanna decided she wasn’t going to give up the store money without some kind of protest. She also slid her grandmother’s birthstone ruby ring off of her hand and slipped it down her bra front for protection.
“Open your purse.”
“No.” He grabbed for it and she wouldn’t let it go.
“Damn it, it’s not worth dying for.” The man spoke to her again in a harsh whisper. She saw that he was eagerly handing over his own wallet.
The purse was wrested from her hand. “No. Give it back!”
He heard the gentle twang in her voice and was intrigued by it. “Don’t be an idiot!” He grumbled under his breath.
Deanna raised her head and her voice in anger. “Will you just be quiet! Ow!” She felt her head being yanked backwards by the hair and she found herself staring at the stocking face of one of the robbers.
“Stand up!” She was forced to her feet. “You want to fight?” A gun was pressed against her ribcage. “I’ll give you something to fight about.” He started to push her towards one of the office doors.
“Where are you taking me?” Sudden terror seized her. She tried to break away but found his grip on her was too strong. “Please. I’m sorry...” Her imagination ran wild with horrible possibilities. Tears began to sting her cheeks.
“Well gee, I got me Scarlett O’Hara boys.” The bank robber laughed as he announced his find to his cohorts.
“Let her go.” The man from the front of the line made a meek plea for her safety.
“Mind your frigging business!”
Deanna continued to struggle and finally broke free. The robber lunged for her. Faster than she was aware, the suited customer was standing and pushed her protectively behind him. He blocked the robber and they scuffled. She stepped backward and was terrified to see the robber gain the advantage and hold the gun to the man’s temple. One arm wound its way around the would-be rescuer’s neck and he was quickly subdued.
She stood trembling. “Oh Gosh, I’m sorry...”
No one else wanted to take a risk. Everyone obeyed the robbers’ demands. The young teller finished filling the bag, customer pockets were emptied of valuables. The gun was still being held on the attractive stranger.
“Get back down on the floor!” The robber commanded Deanna to lie down on the floor.
She was shaking with fear and with guilt. “Please let him go.”
“Lie down!”
She hesitated briefly and then did as she was told.
“Now everyone just remain where you are. Count slowly to three-hundred. If I hear any police sirens or see any cop cars, I will kill this man.” The robbers began to back out of the bank with one of them dragging the struggling man with him.
Deanna couldn’t let them just take the man with them, not after he had risked himself to save her. She looked up and saw a large ceramic demonstration piggy bank on the counter; as soon as she saw the robber look away, she jumped to her feet and grabbed it. She ran after the robber holding the hostage and struck him in the back of the head.
The robber stumbled. “Run!” She screamed at the stranger. He stared at her in disbelief. “Run!” Finally he made a hasty retreat to the street.
Before Deanna could get safely back into the bank, she found herself being grabbed again and this time the gun was held to her head.
“You little bitch.” The robber’s voice was raspy. “You’re coming with us instead then.” He dragged her pleading out the doors and threw her into a van just outside on the street.
Another one of the assailants grabbed her to tie and gag her as the vehicle made a hasty retreat. About a block later, the van made a quick stop and Deanna was surprised to see the suited customer step into the van.
He looked at her in anger. “You couldn’t leave well enough alone, could you?”


  1. Oh, that was a great twist! Makes you want to grab the book and keep going... just as you intended.

    Way to go, Chelle! Good insight into using imagination with the everyday things we know.

  2. Love the excerpt! Gripping! I agree. I get my ideas from life too.

  3. Thank you for stopping by the blog today Kayelle & Julia.


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